page 16, ported vacuum switch, "stuck", is this supposed to be "struck"?? Or maybe better "stamped"
page 26, seat belt recall, "an" should be "a"?
page 28, shock absorber paragraph needs some help, missing comma, repeated wording, you'll see it.
page 31, "example to the left is from a Fed 1969 example", I am not clear the best solution to the wording, muddy.
page 33, "day of moth", I think you get the solution
Just a question, the word "struck" was used just one other time (mufflers, page 24) and usually the word "stamp" was used throughout the article.
Very nice work! proof reading my own work is miserable, I miss things and edit all the time.